Physics
is my major subject. Since I read a science cartoon book about elementary
particles, I have been greatly interested in physics and studied hard. When I
was in the middle school I participated in the Physics Olympiad. These days I
do researches on specific physical phenomenon and join in physics debate
tournaments. The phenomenon has been there since the creation of the universe,
and I, a tiny creation, strive to find its secrets. I feel joy when my
theoretical model corresponds with the phenomena, and when I find an unknown,
buried aspect of it which needs my rescue of research. A joy of a young
physicist!
2. Floating
Ping-Pong ball
A
Ping-Pong ball can float on a tilted airstream. This was one of the phenomena I
have ardently researched last year. I remember the amazing process I have
undergone to explain the oscillations of the ball, establishing, breaking, then
revising the models relentlessly. I also remember the nervous and exciting moments
of the final round of Korea Young Physicists’ Tournament, where I showed the presentation
of my six-month research and debated with the opponent team and judges. Moreover,
the research is not finished: its spin seems to demonstrate the effects of the
Earth’s spin. Floating Ping-Pong ball certainly has a huge meaning in my high
school life.
3. Hip-hop
I
have listened to hip-hop for more than four years. I possess more than thirty
albums, and listen to almost every work of underground hip-hop musicians. Elaborate
manipulation of language on the strong, vibrant beats fascinates me. Its
spirits greatly influenced my attitude to life.
4. Independence
As
a student who lives in a dormitory, I try to be independent. I complete my business
by my own, and reject to be interfered by others. Some people might view this
as stubbornness, but I believe that independence generally had a positive role
on my life. For example, while all the other kids went to expensive hakwons to
get 5 on APs, I declared to my mother that I will study alone and prove my
legitimacy of independence by results. Guess what, I got 5’s on all six
subjects I had taken!
5. Straightforwardness
Straightforwardness
is one of the hip-hop spirits that formed my character. I despise hypocrisy: I
cannot speak with sweet flatteries only to please others. In other words, I
cannot deceive myself. This made me sometimes seem disobedient to the sunbaes
because I frankly disparaged their dogmatic behaviors. However, I do believe
that straightforward people are trustworthy because their words and behaviors
always reflect their true emotions and thoughts.
6. Snapback
Snapback
cap is my favorite fashion. I used to wear my flat-brimmed cap on whenever I go
outside. I have four caps, and one of them is from the rapper Jay Park. I
caught his cap when he threw it to the crowd in a concert. Well, I look cool
when I wear it, don't I? Look at my profile picture!
7. Mr.
Kim Yon Soo
Mr.
Kim is the guide teacher of our physics research club Hyewoomnarae, and one of
the people who influenced me the most. He gave me one of the biggest ordeals in
my life. His insults on my fundamental personalities were simply unbearable. However
I cannot deny that those ordeals made me stronger and brought positive changes on
me. Although I still am afraid of him, I might sincerely thank him one day. Well,
everybody except me says so.
8. Minjok
Music Magazine
Minjok
Music Magazine, or ‘3M’, is a music column magazine club. We wrote articles of
anything about hip-hop and rock music in our blogs, and gathered and published them
as a form of online magazine each week. As the vice president of the club, I wrote
passionately. By writing those articles regularly, I could understand the
hip-hop music more deeply and broadly. I also enjoyed sharing feelings and
opinions with those who comment on my articles. Our club also had street
performances, blending rock and hip-hop music. This is my blog: http://blog.naver.com/horraywwkd
9. Basketball
– middle school friends
Basketball
court has always been a place of passion and true friendship. Most of my best
friends are my basketball teammates, both in middle school and high school. Men
exert biggest energy when they bang on each other and share sweat. True
friendship forms when we absolutely believe our teamwork and pass the ball to
each other. Basketball is still the most efficient way to get rid of the mental
stress.
10. Tutoring
I
have always enjoyed tutoring my friends. In middle school I was a 24-hours-available
private math instructor of my friend. I even drew geometry pictures on wet taxi
windows to answer his question via phone. Partly due to my effort, the tens
digit of his math score changed from 6 to 9. In high school I taught physics to
nine of my friends in MPT(Minjok Peer Tutoring), and one of them even achieved
the 1st place, while I was the 2nd. Anyway I have always
been a passionate and effective tutor who satisfied my peer pupils.
11. Juggling
Juggling
is one of my special talents. I learned juggling in a elementary school club, and
had big and small performances. The biggest one was held in the Seoul National
Park, and the smallest one was in a nursing home, for community service.
Although now I do not have official performances these days, having such skill is
still a great advantage, in that I at least have something to do at a talent
show.
12. Responsibility
As
a president or a vice president of more than three clubs, and as a participant
of numerous group projects, responsibility has been a quality most needed to me
during KMLA life. I believe I had enough responsibility to lead all those clubs
and group projects, diligently working and sometimes sacrificing my comfort.
13. Earphone
I
used to listen to music with earphone very loudly. My roommates sometimes
advise me to reduce the volume, but I still cannot relinquish the joy of
feeling the intense base drum of hardcore hip-hop songs. It feels as if I, not
the rapper, am shouting loudly, and getting rid of all kinds of burden. I’m
just worried if I should wear a hearing aid when I become old.
14. Petition
of appeal
I
am very proud of myself to having been the first person to submit petition of
appeal on the school court and be declared innocent. I was wrongly accused by
the houseparent, so I submitted the final defending speech. However, the court
rejected it because I had no evidence that I was innocent. I went indignant and
submitted a 1000-word essay as a petition of appeal, which mentioned about the fundamental
rules the judiciary must keep, such as the principle of legality. This was revolutionary
because the petition of appeal system existed but was never practically used. In
the second trial I was declared innocent, and I won at the end.
15. Math
As
a science and math kid, I have listened to the most difficult math classes in
KMLA, such as linear algebra, abstract algebra, and differential equations. Mr.
Hinde often gave us extremely challenging problems in quizzes, and I enjoyed
striving to find the right answer with the shortest solution. Math is also a
big part of my academics.
16. Slow-jam
While
I listened to hip-hop I naturally became accustomed to another genre of black
music: slow jam. Slow jam is slow and sticky music of sexy lyrics and
atmosphere. It really fits my taste. I enjoy letting myself sway free inside
its groove and sexy mood. D’Angelo and Frank Ocean are famous foreign slow jam
artists
17. Jaw
line
Jaw
line is my body part which I am very confident of. It is as sharp and straight
as a razor blade. It completes my beautiful profile.
18. Nose bleed
Since I was a little child I suffered from
rhinitis. My nose became weak because I blew my nose so hard and often. My nose
bleeds not only when I am extremely fatigued but also when cold water touches
my face. Once in two days my nose bleeds when I wash my face at the morning. Especially
in test periods my nose easily bleeds and disturbs me.
19. Has-been
I was once named as a number-one physics and
math genius, a brilliant past. However, as I entered KMLA, I had to study many
more subjects other than physics and math. Moreover, I met many kids much
smarter than me. Now nobody calls me a genius anymore. Those who had called me
genius now call me a has-been. I simply admit for this is the position I am
supposed to be, but the nickname ‘has-been’ stirs complex feelings.
20. Haptic phone
My
nickname is ‘haptic phone’, for I turn on only by ‘touch’. I am a deep sleeper,
especially at mornings, and it is impossible for me to wake up by hearing an
alarm. My roommates have suffered from waking me up because the only way was to
physically hit me hard. When I half-consciously woke up, they yelled “Get up,
you stupid haptic phone!”
21. Internet
cartoon
Internet
cartoon is one of my pastime hobbies. Every day cartoons of various genres are
updated on the portal site ‘Naver’, and I subscribe about eight of them daily.
It takes about 30 minutes every day to read them, and I know this is a big
waste of time, but I cannot but keep reading it. It is a significant party of
my daily life.
22. Bouncy
ball
‘Bouncy
ball’ is a phone game I have been doing for about six months every honjeong period.
My friends wonder when I will be tired of this game and play another one.
However, as consistently as I am, the game is regularly updated and new stages appear
again and again, so I cannot stop playing until the update finishes. This game explicitly
shows my stubbornness, and perhaps, to a very positive-minded person, perseverance.
23. Guilty
‘Guilty’
is the title of my favorite song in singing rooms. I perfectly memorize the
lyrics and can sing and rap fairly well. I even performed this song with a
friend in Minjok festival. It is a song of a man’s parting words to his
girlfriend, spitting out the complaints he have had.
24. Mental
stress
As
an ordinary high school senior, I have a lot of mental stress. Part of it comes
from enormous workload, and the other part comes from the pressure of college
application. Sometimes my parents contribute to this stress. I sometimes feel
myself becoming more nervous and impetuous. I should try to resolve it by
positive thinking and hobbies.
25. Love
It
is so lucky to be able to include love in this list. Although love sometimes
does bring me into trouble, generally, it is always a source of invigoration, motivation,
and refreshment. It follows with other beautiful values such as trust, patience,
dream, and consideration. It gives lesson every day and guides me to be a more
mature person. Although the school prohibits it, love is still a beautiful
quality.
26. Last
farewell party
Last
farewell party is one of the moments that come into mind when I think of
happiness. I had to part with my middle school earlier than other kids because
KMLA opened semester on February. At my last day, my classmates prepared a
surprise party for me. When I entered the classroom knowing nothing, the
classroom was filled with balloons and there was a cake on a desk and there
were messages to me on the chalkboard. It took me a while to realize that this
party was for me. I was so moved and swore to myself that I will never forget these
friends. I realized that I was a beloved one. It was certainly one of the
happiest moments in my life.
27. SIGMA
Community service
SIGMA
is a community service club that teaches elementary school children math and science.
I taught math to 13-years-old kids. Although they were easily distracted and
were far from smart, I enjoyed arousing their curiosities and seeing their beautiful
limpid eyes. As a vice president of the club, I passionately taught the kids
and improved the club’s system. Even now I am planning to make an effective
teaching material for the club.
28. Galaxy
TAB
It
is very unusual to use a huge 7-inch tablet as a phone. Therefore my Galaxy TAB
has been some kind of my symbol for two years. Although its size seems overly
big, it surprisingly fits into most of the pockets, and big screen offers great
convenience. Now it is too old: it often malfunctions and is being
disintegrated. It does not gather my friends’ attention anymore. However, I still
feel affection for this gigantic cell phone.
29. Fingers
My
fingers are really pretty. They are also the body parts I am proud of, as well
as my jaw line. My fingers are long, and fingernails are round and handsome.
Even those who say I’m ugly may not be able to deny the beauty of my fingers.
30. Friends
and family
The
most banal cliché ever, but it is still so true that my friends and family are
people who influenced me the most. I always learn a lot from relations with
them. I often feel grateful to the love and care they provide to me, and feel
sorry that I do not compensate enough. They are really precious in my lives.
I was surprised that I could expect what you're going to talk about only skimming through the titles.ㅋㅋㅋ I guess it's because we had many classes in common. Jaw line made me laugh again..ㅋㅋ I guess Mr. Kim was mean to you partly because he is Tsundere and partly because you were not so straightforward as you were when answering his questions related to love, which, he thinks, is the most severe crime(???) for KMLA students.
답글삭제6. a better view of the cap please
답글삭제23. record a cover
17 + 29: show a picture of it
nice reading ur blog
Thanks for reading, but who are you...???
삭제This is for an assignment of English composition class lol
Sorry for overlooking your blog. IN any case, I have some clear suggestions for a great essay:
답글삭제Physics is so central to you, so IT HAS to be the umbrella that ties together elements of your persona.
I really like this sentence:
"I even drew geometry pictures on wet taxi windows to answer his question via phone."
That's the hook. It is fun, creative, and you can adapt this to be relevant to the present even if it happened long ago. From this hook, I would like you to describe your elation towards the "floating ping pong ball." Use this metaphorically in connection with your "juggling" to describe how you "Keep it Real!" in life.
IN order for the ball to float, what is required? In order for you to catch and throw and keep the cycle of juggling going, what needs to happen? Tie in as much from the list above as you can to give us a clear and engaging picture of YOU.
To end the essay, bring us back to the TAXI. I don't know where this taxi might be taking you, but make it matter to the overall picture of you. A hip hop concert? Are you wearing the snap bacK? Are you listening to a favorite song as you draw on this window? In any case, bookend your essay by building on the hook you start with.
While this is a "tone" essay in the middle, it has "present moment hook" in the beginning and end with the taxi and the window. That's a great image! Use it! Be the ball! Float!